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*sniff* So beautiful! Pretty smart adding "speaks French" in Serena's character. I thought the first time that the book was full of advices regarding love, but that seems too cliche. Great description on areas, atmosphere, and character views, I must say. There were some slight grammatical, or let's say typos in grammar. But overall, great one-shot! I hope to read more of your works.
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Nice oneshot! I like it whenever people reference to the original languages of the characters.