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I love what you did with the argument in this chapter, you kept it simple and the characters felt bad about it at the end so it felt very in-character. Good job, keep up the great work!
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PotSmuggle- Lord Kinniekins
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Thanks! I actually wrote that chapter straight here, so what you see is the first draft. I plan to improve it here and there once the criticism comes in. xD
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